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Friday, April 11, 2008

Real editor needed quick

Granny again at it's best...
Mr Cook said there was a healthy population of kaka on Great Barrier but they were rare on the mainland, usually only found on very large forest tracks.
Might be more appropriate if it read like so...
Mr Cook said there was a healthy population of kaka on Great Barrier but they were rare on the mainland, usually only found in very large forest tracts.

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